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As I Dream

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As I Dream

The past condense into the muted-

Signatures of darkling shades and

Mind becomes belligerent, clawing at scabs

Deeply buried in its obscure depths

Time disrupts  in varied and broken twangs

Harsh and fragmented, invoking the

Pockets of hidden domicile, constructed

Of blueprints discovered in the womb

The lord of the deep arise spreading

Its vast limbs, myriad, tentacular, encompassing

Discrete spaces left residual by the breach.

Pulses elongate, conjoin to emote the be-ing

Through the grayish stem mass, something stirs

With forbidding force, stringent in its tones

Etching grooves anew, triggering coalescing webs

Spidery in feel, coercing these to hitch

Their palms together, transposing tremors

Into the numb secret chambers within.

It takes root in the meld of awakening

Darkness, it could be psyche in all its splendor,

The ruler of dreams, “Mana” the first born

And it’s “Sankalpa,” weaving “sphota” in attires

Something igneous breaks forth from primal sphere

Hastening vertical, roaring in terrorizing oceanic might

Threading through a spindle, breaching a column

From within at its webbings, creating infinite racket

 The blaze of the dusk pervades the spirit hurtling me

Through to the zenith, there the dark seems to intervene

Then the seasons of the memory again begin their waltz

The transition now silken smooth, even lightening swift………

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  1. Lovely poem and thanks for stopping by including the like
    All the best, Jenny

    jennysserendipity

    May 15, 2012 at 5:45 pm

  2. Hi Sam – very interesting poem. I especially like these lines:

    Time disrupts in varied and broken twangs

    Harsh and fragmented, invoking the

    Pockets of hidden domicile, constructed

    Of blueprints discovered in the womb

    The broken twangs of time- the pockets of domicile and the blueprints in womb – very cool!. k.

    ManicDdaily

    May 16, 2012 at 11:55 am

  3. Sorry to be late with the reply. I appreciate your words. Thank you very much

    Sam

    May 17, 2012 at 8:30 pm

  4. Amazing Creative Crafting~ Your use of the language and tying it all together with unseen webs is outstanding~ I love poetry that I have to dig my mental teeth into and although I am not you, in form, I do believe I “felt” what you were so masterfully conveying here~ It reminded me a bit of Sri Auribindo’s epic poem, “Savitri”~ Thank you for lighting the Agni Fire in my heart with this piece~!
    Satprem~

    satprem33

    June 5, 2012 at 8:42 pm

    • Sorry to be late with the reply. I am a total idle bones. And I regret it too.
      Thanks for the nice comment. You are very kind.

      Sam

      June 28, 2012 at 8:12 pm

  5. Absorptive. . .

    ecofinanalysis

    June 12, 2012 at 7:52 pm

  6. Superb piece. Amazing depths and sensitivity!

    Keep posting!

    Personal Concerns

    June 30, 2012 at 6:35 pm

  7. Thanks Personal Concerns, Keep coming back 🙂

    Sam

    July 1, 2012 at 7:08 pm


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