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On life and its vagaries

Can You Tell?

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It’s a slow burn, yes; somewhere inside,

Listless, dim, so very dense

Why does it ROAR sometimes-

Reasonless………


It’s a derelict sight, yes, within us

Gray, dispersed, ruinous

Why does it REAR often-

Prompted not…………


It’s a mute struggle, yes, in the interior

Angry, blinding, zapping

Why does it BLARE intermittently-

Taking us completely over……….


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  1. tight. so much said in so little.

    brian

    March 21, 2010 at 2:23 pm

  2. great poem!

    “Why does it BLARE intermittently-
    Taking us completely over……….”

    my fav two lines :):)

  3. Thank you.I know you are being kind
    It soothes me nonetheless 🙂

    Sam

    March 28, 2010 at 12:12 pm


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