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Realistic poems!

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I am trying to go totally realistic in writing. Let’s hope that I would succeed!

The color of the sky


The sky looks of many colors to me

Well I may be wrong

It may be of the one color

That I know nothing of…..!

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Written by Sam

February 24, 2010 at 2:18 pm

6 Responses

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  1. thanks for the poem, the sky is one coler , the other colors that you see are inside your mind.well done

    wordwand

    February 24, 2010 at 2:21 pm

  2. That was quick! I had just posted it! Well well. I am pleased!

    Thank you, it all could be in my mind, the shades that the evening brings, the grays and blues and blacks at the night! Wow!

    Never thought myself that creative!

    Sam

    February 24, 2010 at 2:28 pm

  3. love looking at the sky…so wide open and full of possibility…or i may know nothing as well. smiles.

    brian miller

    February 24, 2010 at 4:00 pm

  4. Thanks, its nice and full of possibilities. But one has to combine it with ones life ( you know the humdrum, ordinary, keeping the wolf off the door type life)…

    Thats the hard part.

    Sam

    February 24, 2010 at 6:35 pm

  5. Hi. I really like this poem. Makes me consider one’s perception in a physical universe. Thanks.

    dustus

    February 28, 2010 at 10:30 am

  6. Thanks, its not easy to break the limits imposed by our senses and our learning. It was a nice comment!

    Sam

    February 28, 2010 at 9:14 pm


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