On life and its vagaries

Night at sea shore

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Two small but pale fists

Hammers on my chest

And the wail of the still night

Begins to blossom within

The star light slants, shimmers

And passes me by

Stealthy drafts pounce on my face to die

The sea stands up, it’s green and viscous

Rocks lengthen-

Waving a whole prairie on the horizon

It’s a time of night at sea shore

That I dare no more!


Written by Sam

February 4, 2010 at 4:21 pm

6 Responses

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  1. ooohhh. beautiful poem. the beginning is so elusive, so confusing, and that’s why i love it so much.
    i dare say no more 😀

  2. Thats lovely. Thank you 🙂


    February 5, 2010 at 8:40 pm

  3. I love the ocean. Such vivid word pictures!


    February 10, 2010 at 8:04 pm

  4. I share the liking for the ocean. Thank you for the kind words!


    February 11, 2010 at 7:58 am

  5. Thank you! Jingle has opened up a whole new world for me… I am so glad I stumbled across your blog!


    February 11, 2010 at 4:13 pm

  6. You are ever so welcome. Jingle is a lovely and inspiring soul. She has opened up a new world for all of us!


    February 11, 2010 at 5:16 pm

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