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WOE

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Woe

Hidden in word

Sudden in look

Reaching to sky……….


Woe

Tigress in stealth

Hooded serpent

Pouncing fangs and claws……….


Woe

Dredging the heart

Draining thoughts

Acid lake advancing…………

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  1. simply fantastic and accurate.

    trisha

    October 2, 2009 at 2:43 pm

  2. Thank you so much

    Sam

    October 2, 2009 at 7:16 pm

  3. Acid lake advancing…that’s brilliant.

    How do you write so much?

    ajfenner

    October 3, 2009 at 12:53 pm

    • Thank you for the nice compliment.

      I love writing prose. Verse is more condensed, never really tried to work in it before. May be my prose habits are making me write more.

      Sam

      October 3, 2009 at 8:06 pm

  4. you have very accurately portrayed woe.

    trisha

    October 3, 2009 at 5:15 pm

  5. Can we really miss much in woe? Sad it is, but every one of us has to go through it at some time or other…..

    Sam

    October 3, 2009 at 8:18 pm

  6. yes.. but it is like acid lake, there is no doubt about that..

    trisha

    October 5, 2009 at 4:24 pm

  7. I felt so too….

    Sam

    October 5, 2009 at 5:57 pm


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